Livia Gabriela Arantes 8-A
Hello, I'm in New York. I'm in the hotel Four Seasons, in Manhattan. Today is my first day and I'm in love. I came to New York to do an english course. I am at Fordham University in New York. It’s summer. I'm 13 years old. I’m with my brother. I plan to stay here for a year. I went to a lot of places today: Statue of Liberty, Rockefeller Center and Central Park.
The Statue of Liberty is located on an island of New York. It was built on October 28th, 1886; and it has several people visiting it all the time. It is beautiful and very great. I was impressed with what I lived in that wonderful place. I'm very happy to have managed to fulfill one of my dreams of visiting the famous Statue of Liberty.
I also went to Rockeffeller Center, a place located on fifth avenue. It was founded in 1939. It is one of New York's favorite sites in winter, as the main square is decorated with a beautiful christmas tree. This is a beautiful place. I was delighted with the ice skating rink.
Central Park is a large park within the city of New York. It was inaugurated in 1857. It's very big and beautiful inside. I took several pictures. I made a picnic with my brother in this beautiful park. It was super fun.
That was my first day here. I loved the places I went. New York is amazing! I hope the other days are incredible as it was today. Now I'm going to sleep. Tomorrow will be my first day of school. Good night!
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ResponderExcluirAlice Claudino- 8°A
Ok, Alice! ☺️😘
ExcluirVery good Livia
ResponderExcluirLaura Aguiar de Andrade-8A
This one surely is, Laura. 🤗
ExcluirLívia, todos os “I” em inglês são capitalizados. Outra coisa, observe que faltou ponto final em alguns lugares. Dê espaço após as vírgulas e pontos finais. Ficou bem legal! Parabéns! Vou continuar a ler e vendo algo mais, te digo, pra que você possa corrigir. Bom trabalho!
ResponderExcluirI love It ❤😁😊
ResponderExcluirEstéfani Guerini Vitor 8°A
I love It ❤😁😊
ResponderExcluirEstéfani Guerini Vitor 8°A