Lavinia
Paola Salgado-9b
Today, I am in New York. I will celebrate my
birthday here. Who financed my way here were my parents. I came with my boyfriend and two more friends. I visited Times Square, Public Library and the Statue of
Liberty. I´m 17 years old. I’ll be here for two months.
Good, I woke up and had breakfast at the hotel. The we went to Times Square. The monst tol hear-about cat walking the what wold. And withowt exaggeration.the
times squar and it´s beautiful. I my boyfriend is my friends we love at it.
We wanted to get to know the New York Public Library. We wanted to enjoy that paradise. When we got there, we walked around the library and it was
already 4:30 PM when my frinds decided to go to the hotel. Me and my boyfriend decided to go up to the Statue of Liberty. To watch
the sunset. We tolkead a little later afte we were watching a movie.
Querida, há partes que não se entendem. Há dados faltantes na introdução. A conclusão está incompleta. Corrija com base na lista de auto avaliação entregue em classe. Bom trabalho.
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